Gonna be honest. The game have potential, but the writing needs some work, the things happen too quickly, and the transition between scenes isn't smooth.
The story line is too narrow and directed. You might consider adding some kind of a "points system" to allow or prevent certain scenes from happening based on previous choices.
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Gonna be honest. The game have potential, but the writing needs some work, the things happen too quickly, and the transition between scenes isn't smooth.
Thank you. We love the theme of black girls. And we plan to return to it, but in a slightly different genre. We will fix the current issue there.
any femdom in this game and character name, please?
Adeola and Ramla tend to be dominant.
The story line is too narrow and directed. You might consider adding some kind of a "points system" to allow or prevent certain scenes from happening based on previous choices.
Yes, it will be implemented in future versions. So it won't feel like a kinetic novel.